Thursday, April 4, 2013

Friday 55

Ironically, took a moment away from our Charity's paperwork to well....put 55 words on paper for the G-man.  Make sure you're charitable and share yours with him.


 
The woman’s crimson sari matched her humiliation tinged cheeks.
Her husband arrogantly shouted a list of shopping demands.
She scurried.
Customers stared.
He berated her choices.

Their young son watched.
Seeing something he wanted, he too yelled.
Screeched.
Cried. 

Customers glanced from father to son.
Evidently BRAT was an international concept,
with no age limit.


4 comments:

mapstew said...

You tell a lot in a small space here my friend. Oh what a world we live in! :¬(

xxx

Brian Miller said...

and the father is teaching the son...and the cycle will perpetuate...

G-Man said...

The Cat's in the Cradle...
Unfortunately this probably isn't fiction.
Very well written Hope.
Loved your Male chauvinist 55
Thanks for playing, thanks for making me feel like boorish brute, and DAMMIT..Have a Kick Ass Week-End!!!

Yvonne Osborne said...

We've all seen this scene played out. Like father like son, over and over and over again. Arrogant asshole...you just wanna hit him over the head with a brick.