Sunday, January 9, 2011

Microfiction Monday

Yes, I found my way back to the playground.  So join me and write a story in 140 characters, then let Susan know you came to play.   


THIS WEEK'S PHOTO
Whadaya mean you're not a Super Hero?  
You've got wings and a great mask. 
Huh? 
It's not a mask?

Okay Magic Blue Poncho Cape, 
take me away!

26 comments:

steven said...

world's colliding! steven

Peggy said...

I loved this, so cute and just like what a child wou say!
Good job!!!

Michael G-G said...

You captured the voice perfectly! Great job--and have a great week.

Sylvia K said...

Yes, you did capture the little guys voice perfectly indeed! What a great one for the day Hope! Have a wonderful week!

Sylvia

Kay L. Davies said...

Great fun! Thanks for the giggle.
-- K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

Jim said...

Eeek! I love it, Hope.

"And my Super Hero, what long fingers you have!"
..

Susan Fobes said...

I knew there would be humor galore tonight!

sylviamorice said...

Haha! If the magic blue poncho doesn't take her away, maybe she could try Calgone!

Hope you have a great week. Cheers!

Maria@BubblegumandDuctTape said...

thank goodness for that blue poncho flying cape, I think I need one of those, lol. Good one, loved it!

Larry said...

been a few years since i've heard calgon take me away . lol

I'm posted also just follow the link below


Mothman
Thanks for reading and commenting
Larry

SparkleFarkle said...

Now that I've read your microfiction, I'd be willing to bet Mothman's real name is Calgon. LOL!

Loved your mini-tale!

anthonynorth said...

A funny realisation :-)
Enjoyed that.

5thsister said...

At first I thought Mothman was asking her to take him away! It's too early for me. On 2nd read I got it. And it is good!

Madeleine said...

LOL! I LOVED this one :O)

Jinksy said...

The worm has turned, I see!

ninotaziz said...

Poor Mothman - having to meet all sorts of expectations!

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Excellent Hope, and once I read some of the comments, I got the Calgon Line. It's been awhile since I heard that.

Hope you have a great week ahead.

Akelamalu said...

Another super hero! Quite a few of us saw that in the pic this week. :)

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

great MFM.. good one!!

Mama Zen said...

Nicely done!

Diane said...

Close enough, right?!?!?!? :O)

Karen said...

What a cute take on the pic! Thanks for taking me on a different tale's adventure! :>

Doc FTSE said...

These MFN's Are really good!

Scott said...

lol, now there's a leap of faith, eh? kool!

MartyrMom said...

Too funny!

kaykuala said...

A Super hero, not a Super hero. What does it matter. He got her didn't he?