Sunday, October 17, 2010

Microfiction Monday

Write a story in 140 characters, then let Susan know you came to play.





This week's illustration.

Rapunzel's sister Repulsiva 
thinks dieting will make her beautiful, 
but isn't this extreme?

Yeah.  
But don't tell her bread's fattening.

14 comments:

Michael G-G said...

Doubt that "Repulsiva" will make the Top Ten Baby Name's list this year--but you never know. She's ion for a world of hurt, if she thinks she can get by eating only bread.

Good one, hope. Have a great week.

Fay's Too said...

Love it! You could market the Brick-U-In diet plan!

Jane said...

Love it!

Jane

Kay L. Davies said...

Repulsiva. Oh dear, that makes me laugh.
I agree with Fay, the Brick-U-In diet plan sounds like a great idea.
LOL
Good microfiction.

Kay, Alberta

gospelwriter said...

Yes, that is going a bit far - what some of us won't do in the name of beauty! Nice MM!

Pat said...

I laughed the most at Rapunzel's sister's name...Repulsiva. What were her parents thinkin'? (As Doctor Phil would say).If those little lovaves of bread are all she has for decades, she'll lose weight.

Ms.Daisy said...

Hope,
That is really funny. I love the name "Repulsiva!" HaHa! She'll find out that bread is fattening! Good MM!


~Jean

Peggy said...

RUPULSIVA, how funny is that.
fay's right, I feel a franchise deal in the works.
Loved it, you are very clever.

hope said...

Thanks my blogger friends!

Had technical issues the past two days; never use the work computer on your lunch hour to try and leave comments. :)

So if you didn't receive a comment, know that I actually visited you and my work computer thought Comments were it's lunch!

Quilly said...

Woman does not live by bread alone! LOL! Good luck to her. She's going to need it!

Diane said...

Sister jealousy..... too bad. :O)

KB said...

I can't stop laughing at her name. Nice job.

Madeleine said...

Repulsiva, what an excellent name like Cruella De Ville! Love it! :O)

evenstarwen said...

Anyone with that name would have issues. Too funny.