Friday, August 6, 2010

Friday 55

It's time to play "Write a story in 55 words". When you do, be sure to let the G-Man know.




Unlike some women,
she hated watching a man grovel.
And to be fair, after a few birthdays,
it was more difficult to get up off one's knees.

"Relentless, huh?" she muttered as he gloated.
"I demand a pardon upfront.
Jewish guilt is nothing compared to Southern Belle failure to be polite."

"Gee man, you win."

10 comments:

Jingle said...

nice 55.
a poetic and fun story.

G-Man said...

Hope...?
You My dear just brought a HUGE smile to an old grizzly face.
Thank You for this little gift to me, and to the Blogging Community.
Loved your 55!!
If you visit a few 55'ers Fine.
If not? Life goes On!!!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End

Brian Miller said...

yay! you did a 55...smiles. but groveling worked didnt it?

Thom said...

Oh the power of groveling :) This brought a huge smile to my face. Well done my friend. Have a great Friday :)

Alice Audrey said...

Now I'm wondering where the guilt and the politeness apply.

My 55 is here.

Jannie Funster said...

Ah! I LOVE your sense of humor. Jewish guilt vs Belle protocol.

Outta the park on this one!! :0

-- a friend of G-Man's

Mona said...

To err is human, to forgive is divine!

Nessa said...

That G-Man is hard to resist. Well done.

KB said...

This one made me smile.

Mine’s here.

Susan at Stony River said...

A Southern Belle would NEVER fail to be polite LOL but I love that "Gee Man," -- well done!