Monday, March 15, 2010

Microfiction Monday

With a mere 140 characters, use Susan's photo of the week to tell a story. Then make sure you tell her you played. Come on! It's fun! Here's this week's photo.




Having learned his lesson,
he stood at a respectful distance from the Princess.
She'd warned his wooden expression
would freeze like that one day.
Her Wizard had made it so.

17 comments:

Titus said...

Genius!
Evocative picture made absolutely magical by your words.

Peggy said...

I agree with Titus;
Absolutely magical. We should call your piece, Magical Monday, cause that's what it has been for me!

steven said...

what a clever piece hope!! steven

Quilldancer said...

LOL! Beware irritated Princesses. Especially beware of irritated Princesses with wizards!

Thom said...

Oh there is nothing like an evil Princess with a wizard. :) Well written :)

Alice Audrey said...

Thus he was doomed forever to be nothing but a passive observer.

Matthew said...

I am always in awe of people who manage to say so much with so little. Marvellous work. :)

Sylvia Morice said...

Great take on the picture!

Susan at Stony River said...

Loved it! How often did my parents tell me something similar and I believed it?!

Good think I hadn't see this LOL

Sylvia K said...

What a terrific take on the picture, Hope! And you're right, we all see such different things and that's what makes it such fun! Have a great week!

Sylvia

anthonynorth said...

Ah, those wizards can come in useful :-)

An Eerie Tapestry said...

Liked that. Great little fable; mean little princess.

A Blog In The Rough said...

Freezing faces times two :) Funny how we thought that!

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

Very smart , indeed.
Peggy is right, yours the best!

Sorry I am late this week,
Been really busy shopping for colleges
With my daughter! Lol

Happy MM!

Have you a WONDROUS WEEK!

hugs
shakira

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Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Magic of some form was part of the picture this week. Nicely done Hope, like Susan I've been told my face would also freeze like that on occasion.

Nessa said...

i like transformations and princesses and wizards. nice.

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hope said...

Thanks folks!

I promise to make personal comments next week...this week I've barely had time to turn on the computer and read!